Aloha Lawrence...
Quite the double-up you have penned herein... two, two, two points in one... I see these within the lines... take every other line and separate these from the odd lines... and use the last line twice... as...
Indignities done to others
With a dignified indifference
Returns to them to receive
Shown by those
And...
Done without question to the ones expecting
From their favorite backs to stand on and crack
To always be counted upon as easy forgivers
But an awakening from that
Has miraculously occurred to restore their pride.
and the second...
As a custom
As accustomed
An unexpected loss of a felt empathy
Healing from political correctness
Once having an abundance of empathy to give
At least some to come to get...
With identities taken and their minds snatched
Cheek turners, hymn hummers and knee benders
But an awakening from that
Has miraculously occurred to restore their pride.
I believe these to be concise in difference and a bit more clarifying to me of your points raised in the post...
now on to name the offenders and the offended... compendia? conspectus? conspicuous? quaintly put also... thank you for this bit of a stroll through the 'Latin'... and your thoughts... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two
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Aloha Lawrence... Quite the double-up you have penned herein... two, two, two points in one... I see these within the lines... take every other line and separate these from the odd lines... and use the last line twice... as... Indignities done to others With a dignified indifference Returns to them to receive Shown by those And... Done without question to the ones expecting From their favorite backs to stand on and crack To always be counted upon as easy forgivers But an awakening from that Has miraculously occurred to restore their pride. and the second... As a custom As accustomed An unexpected loss of a felt empathy Healing from political correctness Once having an abundance of empathy to give At least some to come to get... With identities taken and their minds snatched Cheek turners, hymn hummers and knee benders But an awakening from that Has miraculously occurred to restore their pride. I believe these to be concise in difference and a bit more clarifying to me of your points raised in the post... now on to name the offenders and the offended... compendia? conspectus? conspicuous? quaintly put also... thank you for this bit of a stroll through the 'Latin'... and your thoughts... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two