Wednesday, December 7, 2005

Humility Comments

Rating: 5.0

Snow, falling thick and white, along the village street,
People struggling through the drifts, their shopping to complete,
Kids dragging sledges, excitement fills their minds,
Rolling a giant snowball, great, cos this is snow that binds.
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Ernestine Northover
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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 29 January 2015

Great poem on snow and likes it.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 29 January 2015

A very good poem and great style of writing.

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Fay Slimm 16 October 2008

Very wise and very humbly written, with your usual polished style. Thank you for this one. It brings back lovely memories. From Fay a 10

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Andrew Blakemore 01 May 2008

Another great write Ernestine, wonderfully descriptive work. Andrew x

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Duncan Wyllie 29 March 2006

A stillness and quiet in this.Nature in full bloom, even when spring has not come yet your words still blossom.Brilliant! Love Duncan

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Shannon Chapel 09 December 2005

Ernestine, This is a truly beautiful poem. Very visually rich. Nice job. Shannon

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Cj Heck 07 December 2005

This is lovely, Ernesting. Such a beautiful message. Hugs, CJ

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Uriah Hamilton 07 December 2005

I dig the spiritual message of this one!

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