Humen Being (Translation) Comments

On every action Let there be All the five organs. fine poem Jazib

My creator has bestowed two eyes and two ears upon us. Then He has bestowed upon us one tongue by the divine wisdom......... Allah has given us a judgemental brain to think what is right and what is wrong. We choose to be wrong often. your point of view toward living a life impress me. Thanks

Dear Jazib, I enjoyed your poem and Love. I see a vast philosoph3cal thought in it. I appreciated also writing techniques you used contrasting love to. As for your translations6 they produce an impression of a word for word translation from Urdu, not a rhymed poem. Probably you focused more on content6 rather than on poetic form of these verses. I wish you every success!

Hi Jazib! You write very good master... dr. riza

All the five duties are assigned to it and the doors of ears and eyes are closed. Blaming, back biting, lying and complaining are our favourite dishes such as rose petal jam. If we keep our ears and eyes open, we may transform from homosapiens to humen beings gradually... nice theme. It is really beautiful poem shared nicely. Thanks.

very true, we've become too blind! we use are tongue more than our hearing, sight, and mind. Very well said! you have a way with words my friend.

Well written on tongue, if we talk less many of problems can be avoided