Tuesday, May 29, 2007

Humble Tears Comments

Rating: 5.0

My time is all I have to give
some relief is all you seek
A few words perhaps
of understanding and hope
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Anna Kelly
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Alison Cassidy 30 May 2007

Unspoken signals between kindred souls make rich pickings for poetic inspiration as you show here in this unpretentious and honest piece about compassion and humility. Might I suggest you leave out the word 'ashamed' in the second stanza. I don't think you need it. A poem written straight from the heart. love, Allie xxxx

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