Neither I have right to express opinion,
Nor do I have any desire to make humble submission,
It is just the guilt of admission,
To ask for something can be out of question,
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Humble submission, wow, what a well crafted and penned poem, definitely, you got my vote 10+++you have shown to me and the entire world of your great talent, keep it up! HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Whole universe is direct under your umbrella, Took every care to gift each corner with Messiah,
Day and night I die with dishonour and humiliation --> a powerful verse these verses can't be penned from anyone... they were penned just from an experimented indian man... great... a rich content...
Neither I have right to express opinion, Nor do I have any desire to make humble submission, , , , ,10
God only should save this world with so much frustration expressed in this poem.
The imagery is really great I can totally picture my self in the poem