Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, July 18, 2009

Humble Submission Comments

Rating: 4.9

Neither I have right to express opinion,
Nor do I have any desire to make humble submission,
It is just the guilt of admission,
To ask for something can be out of question,
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Erica Santana 04 May 2010

The imagery is really great I can totally picture my self in the poem

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Lexi Zamora 28 January 2010

Really really good i could picture everything 10++++ job

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Romeo Della Valle 27 December 2009

Humble submission, wow, what a well crafted and penned poem, definitely, you got my vote 10+++you have shown to me and the entire world of your great talent, keep it up! HAPPY NEW YEAR!

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Lalvani Rekha 16 October 2009

Whole universe is direct under your umbrella, Took every care to gift each corner with Messiah,

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Day and night I die with dishonour and humiliation --> a powerful verse these verses can't be penned from anyone... they were penned just from an experimented indian man... great... a rich content...

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Radha Seth 25 August 2009

Neither I have right to express opinion, Nor do I have any desire to make humble submission, , , , ,10

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Shilpa Maheswari 19 August 2009

we can only submit to him....10

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Indani Narayan 17 August 2009

ask favour humbly from god....10

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Lalvani Rekha 15 August 2009

what else can we do for it....10

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Mubeen Sadhika 15 August 2009

Nice composition. Thoughtful.

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 14 August 2009

All roads lead to Glorius God. Great write.10.

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Pami Panchal 14 August 2009

we can onlu suurender to HIM/////10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 14 August 2009

God only should save this world with so much frustration expressed in this poem.

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Jigisha Vyas 10 August 2009

we can only submit to HIM....10

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Raju Rajput 10 August 2009

we can pray god...10

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Sulochna Pandit 10 August 2009

the only way left is to pray god...10

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Maulin Shah 09 August 2009

we have only one option tht is to submit to him...10

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Saroj Davde 08 August 2009

u should surrender n submit....10

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Radha Seth 08 August 2009

we can pray n submit to god...10

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Kunwar Patel 08 August 2009

we have to surrender and request....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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