Friday, May 29, 2009

Humble Lamb Comments

Rating: 5.0

a.m.
six o'clock
again and again
time comes back to me
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Seema Aarella 10 June 2009

each of us is a humble lamb, hope some unseen hand protects us always when we step into the dark dungeons and wild forests......nice one Ahmad! with a new emotion for each person u meet, u make ur page a concoction of variety All the best!

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Maria Sudibyo 02 June 2009

umm, i don't understand. but the words and shape are nice.

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Obinna Eruchie 02 June 2009

good for reading, it is.

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Meghan Pearson 01 June 2009

awww that was soo peaceful to read

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 01 June 2009

Another excellent dedication, it flows embracing much in meaning and imagery. Well thought out

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Surya . 31 May 2009

very deep and impressive poem.posted 10 surya

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Mellifluous words ebbing and flowing of overflowing feelings.10.

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Ravi A 31 May 2009

A stunning poem. I see history repeating itself.

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Omar Ibrahim 31 May 2009

wow! ! ! the poem is stunning....and the shape as well...: D: D 10++

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Louis Rams 30 May 2009

in this i see history repeating itself in so many ways. and it is a nice dedication

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Indira Babbellapati 30 May 2009

the verse as well the dedication reads straight from heart!

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Ramesh T A 30 May 2009

Another poem of yours in a fine expression!

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Seema Chowdhury 30 May 2009

another of your nice poem with good wishes or a friend.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 30 May 2009

You inflict a sense of humble in this writes.

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Merna Ibrahim 30 May 2009

A fantastic poem and writen in a great form and forming a great shape! ! well written.....Merna

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C. P. Sharma 30 May 2009

A great poem composed with great graphic skill. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. CP

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 May 2009

Humble lamb speaks as a scholar in high sounding words.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 29 May 2009

An excellent poem within a nice form! 10+++

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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