Tuesday, October 27, 2009

Humble Creatures We Are Comments

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Humble creatures we are
mellow breeze and the running stream
green pasture and hills around
all are ours, no deal from thee
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Indira Renganathan 27 October 2009

naked lies in sweet tongues and the foul smell, yet delicious dishes...superb expression....nice way of distinguishing man from other creatures...to end with truthful words of reality....wonderful poem

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Ian Bowen 27 October 2009

Excellent piece of poetry. Much to like in your well written piece.10/10 Regards, Ian

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