Humans Have Developed, Then Why Not Rats? Comments

A very funny poem over a rat race incident. On the one side I laughed at the way you presented the picture and on the other side, I had symapthy for the loss of your favourite things.

A delightful story of a distressing experience. I find your title interesting. Do you think that humans are so different to the rats?

Sen through your eyes and the conversations you have with them makes it thoroughly enjoyable.A beautiful poem with childlike innocence. Definitely brings smiles. Angel

funny but thoughtful............enjoyed 10

Really unoriginal, inspiring and unexpected. I love the imagination behind it - I can't think of many other poets who would be able to think up such an idea.11/10

Sorry my dear but I feel sorry for Rats... who have to live with humans who hunt them all the time

Unbelievably eloquent... I'm absolutely floored. Hats off, young bard!

Nice poem.. It's unique.. keep up the good work.. :)

Damn for a 12 year old girl totally blew me away with your words, am looking out for you when ye reach my age lol. Really really good job :)

Good effort, and an information to all, thanks for sharing,10++ and in the chineese belief rats years always brought good things, in a temple in Rajasthan rats are heroes, the devotes offered foods to them. rats are the symble of intellegence too.

good write, thanx for bringing it to my attention

This one is really lovely to read! Good job little girl! You got the talent!

Very expressive I don't think they would make good pets. Keep this one aside for a few years and see how your ideas change as you grow. Good luck with your writing.

Good job. This is a good poem.

thanks rats for your naughties that caused a fantastic poetry from Aishu rgrds/salu.

real rat story with the feel of live experience!

that's sucky man... i never liked anythin' rat-like! ! ! written very well for your age! ! ! you can see it all flashing through your fead as you read, easy to understand! ! !

A captivating rats' tale ;) - written with humour, emotion and a real flair for language. Thank you for inviting me to read. S :)

Hi Aiswarya You are very talented and intelligent.Your poem brings out a reality show in words. good selection of vocabulary with a touch of humour.Good poem, a 9 from me. Greetings Satheesan Rangorath

great job! ! well done. :) sorry about ur things, mice have gotten 2 my things 2.: /