Monday, June 11, 2012

Humanity Stop Your Insanity Comments

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Dust fire smoke and disaster
Darkness suffocation forever
Demons Devils and a monster
All free with no master
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Guess Who
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Dr Antony Theodore 23 November 2018

Help me to accomplish the quest I'm hear to do For there is a future for you too In a world of peace and harmony Where there is no humanity. a very good poem. like the flow of the poem and the language. thank u. tony

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Yash Shinde 27 October 2012

nice very well composed........flows well and delivers a great message :)

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Theo Williams 30 June 2012

Nice very well written, I like it. Thanks for recommending to me. Williams, T.

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Unwritten Soul 14 June 2012

From the start to end of line, it made up with great lines...the meaning is bolder there lies within the poem u wrote, i like the style and reaching the end the conclusive summary really tell all. It really a good poem, yes it is Guess who..._Unwritten Soul

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 12 June 2012

Complete exigency mankind holds. Great probing poetry

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 12 June 2012

Hi Life is a school room, we will never be perfect until we are here on this Earth. We are here to solve our challenges, what in reality we attracted. If you read more of my poems, you will hear more about these.' Just keep your mind on beauty and harmony and when you really believe it, you will have it. I know I came from the tragic of life, wars, dead bodies, starvation, you name it, but made it to peace and harmony. It took me 78 years or so, but I found what not too many people have, by keeping my mind in the midst of tragic on peace, harmony, health, good life and true happiness. Many thanks for commenting on my poem.

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Nontobeko Dlamini 12 June 2012

a good rhyme to such a matter of urgency.

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Franca Kenneth 12 June 2012

I like this poem, its to the point and very well written.

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Cierrah Smiles 12 June 2012

I like this poem very well written, I like the last phrase For there is a future for you too In a world of peace and harmony Where there is no humanity

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