Dust fire smoke and disaster
Darkness suffocation forever
Demons Devils and a monster
All free with no master
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nice very well composed........flows well and delivers a great message :)
Nice very well written, I like it. Thanks for recommending to me. Williams, T.
From the start to end of line, it made up with great lines...the meaning is bolder there lies within the poem u wrote, i like the style and reaching the end the conclusive summary really tell all. It really a good poem, yes it is Guess who..._Unwritten Soul
Hi Life is a school room, we will never be perfect until we are here on this Earth. We are here to solve our challenges, what in reality we attracted. If you read more of my poems, you will hear more about these.' Just keep your mind on beauty and harmony and when you really believe it, you will have it. I know I came from the tragic of life, wars, dead bodies, starvation, you name it, but made it to peace and harmony. It took me 78 years or so, but I found what not too many people have, by keeping my mind in the midst of tragic on peace, harmony, health, good life and true happiness. Many thanks for commenting on my poem.
I like this poem very well written, I like the last phrase For there is a future for you too In a world of peace and harmony Where there is no humanity
Help me to accomplish the quest I'm hear to do For there is a future for you too In a world of peace and harmony Where there is no humanity. a very good poem. like the flow of the poem and the language. thank u. tony