Monday, February 19, 2018

Humanity Lost Comments

Rating: 5.0

They smashed and crushed our future
Smoked and burned our hopes to air
Dreams been stripped from hearts
Dark shadows encroached and raped us
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Rini Shibu
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Nudershada Cabanes 22 February 2018

Your poem speaks of the reality in our society today. Excellent. Nuder

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Rini. 22 February 2018

Thanks Nuder..! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 20 February 2018

Humans are able for great achievements but also for great atrocities.Unfortunately most times we choose the second.Great poem!

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Rini Shibu 21 February 2018

Thanks kostas Lagos

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Bipasha D 19 February 2018

I feel the easiest thing for a human begin is to love and care. It's a pity how we have deformed ourselves! ! Thanks for choosing a crucial topic for the poem.

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thanks Bipasha for your feedback..! !

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White Tiger 19 February 2018

Hi Rini. An excellent poem. Total truth. It's shameful of what has become of our society. Thank you for sharing. A 10+++

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thank you so much Charlie for visiting

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 February 2018

Running here and there for peace Begging for love and unity Wounded we are, no humanity....it is a clear picture of present society. Dear Rini you have so nicely and touchingly inscribed this poem that any reader will like it.

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thank You so much Kumar for your wonderful comment..! ! !

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Bill Cantrell 19 February 2018

Mankind for the most part has abused his stewardship so callously, violence is abhorrent! ! Blessed be those who pursues peace, excellent poem of worth my friend

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thanks Bill for your comment..! !

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Lamar Cole 19 February 2018

Great poem about humanity lost. This is one of the best poems about humanity that I have ever read. This poem is the work of a Great Poet that we are lucky to have here on Poem Hunter.

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thanks you so much Lamar..! !

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Cheryl Tutaan 19 February 2018

This is reality. We all humans have to accept all the challenges of this life through the help of our Almighty. Thank you for sharing this very insightful piece, Rini...a highest 10! cheryl♡

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Rini Shibu 19 February 2018

Thanks Cheryl...! !

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