Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Humanity Is Dead Comments

Rating: 5.0

Humanity is dead
An auto rickshaw ran away hitting
A pedestrian who was walking
By the side of road in midnight.
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Tulsi Shrestha
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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 September 2019

Addition: A 10 Full Score for the voting.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 September 2019

A well thought out poem, amazingly written. IF I may say, life is like a medal, it has constantly two sides. This poem describes one side of that medal, how about the other side? As I said an amazing poem, well worded, but one sided. There are enough occurrences that show the other way round. Believe me, there have been enough victims who are rescued in time and brought instantly to the ER. Your poem is an excellent one. I have enjoyed very much. Thank you for sharing.

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