Friday, June 19, 2015

Humanity Is At Stake Comments

Rating: 3.5

All are playing the track of humanity
but humanity is at stake
ostenration is at high peak
rambling to show better before
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Melissa Patty 17 July 2015

I enjoyed reading this poem, its so true this poem because the world is changing drastically everyday. The world we live in today is controlled by technology. Life is much greater than that. Humanity is evolving, we need to live life freely. But the world is filled with selfishness and distruction, The way I look at it as the worlds not a perfect place but its how you choose to live it is what's important for humanity. Great poem!

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Soumita Sarkar 24 June 2015

Really a nice ode...........on the behest of the erosion of human values...Thanks.

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Hans Vr 20 June 2015

While reading this poem i felt a certain recognition of own thoughts. So true the world is standing on the edge. Greed is still big, but science and technology have progressed beyond imagination If greed does not decrease and kindness exponentially increase, humanity's future seems bleak But somehow I beleive quite strongly and see it daily that kindness is increasing rapidly, a true kindness and wisdom revolution is on its way. I believe we are moving to a safe, abundant and kind world.

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