Humanity Grown Old Comments

A powerful write on a great theme. Despite pains and sufferings encountered by humanity, there is still hope for a brighter tomorrow. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.10+++

...May the breathed out hate be consumed by the deadly demon! .. I say amen to that. Humanity will continue kicking, because being old is more on the perception when love can always be renewed. A fine writing, dear poet!

....'''can he love, yes he can, ....................... excellently JA JI U speak of HUMANITY Your instincts are deep and sound hope all will hear your ringing sound without limitations of any bounds great wisdom you share who can or poets like me with you ourselves compare most are the dhoool of land many say its called sand but still we are all grand as we both friends walk hand inn hand let us make this land a humanities achievement GRAND

Humanity, although old and wrinkled, has gone through a lot and survived, and (hopefully) it will survive in the future too. We can only hope for the best. A beautiful poem Mr Jawad. Thanks for sharing.

The humanity is still charming like a couple enjoying life on the hills No worry love is still the most powerful instinct of the sick old man.......I liked the expression! (10)

excellently compose this poem great sense of humanism The humanity is still charming like a couple enjoying life on the hills No worry love is still the most powerful instinct of the sick old man /// vote//10++++++++++++++++++

Metallic weapons which are used in war provoke thought and bring sadness to many. Wrinkle with a record emotion it saved itself from sharp stones with tear and fear. But all need peace with decorative flowers. Sweet delicious fruits are peaceful. Only love builds paradise. An interesting poem is excellently penned...10