Humanity Cries Comments

Nice one MAN

The endless fight between good and evil, the mighty and the weak is beautifully depicted. Goodness will rise and shine. An optimistic poem with a message of hope!

A heartfelt plea yet it is not heard by the deaf ears. God will deal with those tyrants

Ever so powerful and inspiring! ..

So true ans magnificently expressed! .. May we find hope in the light! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++

we emerged to light, our spirits strong, our hearts aglow, do not drag us back to the dark of night. Ever so heart moving! ..

Humanity is at its low. Who cares with selfish/ oneupmanship attitute?

Powerful line: They want to take us from light to darkness, with shadows creeping through our days, Innocents trapped in their cunning game, while we watch hope slowly fade away....

Excellent line 'Oh devil within, do you not see? your grasp is tight, but life is brief, one day you too will leave this world, with nothing left, just shadows of grief'

Yes, I agree. Humanity is crying b'coz of some crook leaders.

A powerful poem depicting despotic rulers: Their greed for power. So true, life is brief and they too will leave this world with nothing. Beautifully expressed poem.

Bravo Asim Thanx for this excellent piece

This is a remarkable piece indeed.... thanks for sharing.....