We smile with hatred in our eye
we forgive through shame and despite
hidden engenders reveal through time
jealousy is a nasty attribute
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You have painted the contrasts in humanity, the good and the bad, the beauty and the ugly, the strangeness and the commonness when humanity is experienced. Keep on writing. You may need to give attention to some punctuation marks and how they can add to the flow of thoughts and contrasts. Thanks for inviting to comment on your poems.