the darkness consumeth the light I so long for
The deepness of a conversation turn sour
Crinkling the noses of others as one would do to a foul smell
A rotting corpse laid out at their feet
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This poem makes you seem way above 15, it has such maturity in the words. Extremely well said. Loved it
These are salient lines.. that are really edible. Nice writeup..Cheers. The Sage Anthony Edmond John
excellent, wise, meaningful writting..thought you are 50 yrears as those words are older than your green trees, , , enjoyed it
I thoroughly enjoyed the use of ye ol' English and the powerful telling of humanity's dark side. Very entertaining.