Wednesday, July 8, 2009

Humanity Comments

Rating: 5.0

the darkness consumeth the light I so long for
The deepness of a conversation turn sour
Crinkling the noses of others as one would do to a foul smell
A rotting corpse laid out at their feet
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Alex Gomez 19 July 2010

I thoroughly enjoyed the use of ye ol' English and the powerful telling of humanity's dark side. Very entertaining.

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Danny H 09 July 2009

This poem makes you seem way above 15, it has such maturity in the words. Extremely well said. Loved it

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Anthony Edmond John 08 July 2009

These are salient lines.. that are really edible. Nice writeup..Cheers. The Sage Anthony Edmond John

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excellent, wise, meaningful writting..thought you are 50 yrears as those words are older than your green trees, , , enjoyed it

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