Sunday, May 10, 2009

Humanity? ? ? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Advocator of peace
But bringer of war
50 in all
Yet, one shining star.
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Leslie Alexis
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 December 2009

‘…but death // Is a better worse than the death // They live in daily –plagues…’ A touching, humanist poem…you’re a Poet with Humane Heart / Face…/ Values Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Angelic Warrior 25 May 2009

i believe your right...for I agree completly and utterly! that's a fantastic poem you have there....should send it to Obama...: D wonder what he would think...or any leader of a powerful nation.... for we the people realise that they are idiotic fools amazing poetry 20++ :)

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Shashendra Amalshan 18 May 2009

'Yet, God bless our nation? Which God? The same one we remove from schools in the form of pray? ' we ask thsese questioms everyday...good words of wisdom..thanks...10++

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Ken E Hall 17 May 2009

Meaningful poem on our earths mess so messy is it human...enjoyed the fire in your poem written from your heart, your last line sooooo true, also talk to your neighbor not some internet junkie 10000 miles away...great piece of work++++10 regards

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Surya . 13 May 2009

a citizens cry for the nation and its people.heat touching.posted 10 surya

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Bright Rose 13 May 2009

my dear Leslie, that was a lovely well written piece of art, I really enjoyed reading it, you just managed to evoke my feelings and my senses, very well done as always, you are truly gifted

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Evaughn Gray 12 May 2009

very well written Les. it's a very beautiful piece truly enjoyable to read! ~ Hazel G.E

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Lynda Robson 12 May 2009

An inspring piece, well said Les, 10 Lynda xx

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 May 2009

A beautiful inspirational write for humanity. Keep it up, Leslie.

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Louis Rams 11 May 2009

if we was to take one slice of bread from each american, we could feed a nation, and if we was to take the voices of all who wish for equality then there would be no mention of war, and the meek would then truely inherit the earth. stop the war, stop the gore. take one hour, relieve them of power. a gr8t write from the heart.

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Very true, i like it, great job spreading the message =) .....i wanna go help over seas, they're the ones that need an economic change 1st. =) great write. keep it up. =)

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 11 May 2009

A powerful write straight from a conscientious heart -You are blessed with a gift for writing and getting your message across

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I agree with Sandra as it is an extremely meaningful piece and you have put so much into to it. I would be inclined to condense it a little and maybe make part 1 and part 2, as it is a lot to take in at once and this way the impact could be stronger with fewer words. You have such enthusiasm and talent and it is worth all of 10. Karin Anderson

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Eyan Desir 11 May 2009

This was a good write i felt it was to long But it was good

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Sandra Martyres 11 May 2009

A very meaningful piece Leslie..you speak from your heart....on behalf of all suffering humanity...

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Ramesh T A 11 May 2009

Indeed war creates all such problems which are quite inhuman though it is done for peace! This is the irony of humanity in the world! In the name of humanity high price is paid and horrible incidences are perpetuated. This worries all without human solution as seen from your poem. Nice depiction!

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Kesav Easwaran 11 May 2009

i liked the concern you show there on love and international peace, Leslie...powerful noble write...10

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Shirin Sheikhi 11 May 2009

humanity something that we seem forgot to care, keep wrting poems about love for one but not for all people around the world. thank you for expressing love to all +++++++++10

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

nice the best i like here is love thy neighbour as thyself this sayssssssss it allllllllll -10 anjali

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Fay Slimm 11 May 2009

A very powerful piece Les.... full of your passion and deserves to be re-read time and again.... a well derserved 10 + + + from Fay..

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