Sunday, March 3, 2019

Humanity Comments

Rating: 4.8

Leaning on that graffiti riddled brick wall, she sat
Holding a cardboard with crudely written few words
I am a human; Are you?
Falling raindrops, smudged the edges
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Vattakkatt Premchand
COMMENTS
LeeAnn Azzopardi 31 August 2023

Bravo my friend I really enjoyed this one

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Jazib Kamalvi 07 March 2019

Write comment. A good start, Vattakkatt. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Tom Maxwell 06 March 2019

Very good honest thoughts, today our population worry about A stray dog, more than A homeless person

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Julia Luber 05 March 2019

Compelling haunting imagery about what sounds like a homeless person holding up a sign all tattered.

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thank you very much Julia

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Prabir Gayen 04 March 2019

Humanity we hear; humanity we preach Humanity we buy and humanity we sell But showing humanity is never our turn....beautiful poem

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Thank you very much for your valuable comment.

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Kim Barney 03 March 2019

Wow! I like this! A great first poem to post here! Welcome to Poem Hunter and may you post many more!

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Thanks a lot phil. I really value your comments Prem

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Thank you very much for your comment. i really appreciate it

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Chinedu Dike 03 March 2019

The inherent indifference of humanity is aptly captured in the poem. An insightful creation set aside for honest reflection. Thanks for sharing Vattakkatt.

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Thank you very much for your very inspiring words. I am very new to any kind of writing, so it is really so helpful. Prem

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