Thursday, August 23, 2012

*human Tragedy Comments

Rating: 2.9

I have a fortunate fate that there is no
living being yet on the other planet
otherwise I would have been too assertive
and my candy- love would have started to
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Expressive and elusive of nothing vital, this poem has the potential to be your masterpiece of all contributions over here. Attention to be paid to the capital letters where ever necessary and punctuation marks of proper need might have added a little more beauty to these lines.

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