Friday, November 11, 2005

Human Suitcase Comments

Rating: 5.0

you made My bones
Flesh and skin
you and him
A human suitcase
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Wanda Swim Strunk
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Kimberly Strothman Anderson 27 November 2005

When I worked at a social service agency we used to say 'save your drama for your mama'. It was very annoying saying because I believe most times our moms and dads gave us the drama we have to overcome to be victorious.

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Keiah Delu 20 November 2005

this was well-written, your details thought provoking, felt the abuse and the anger...job well -done

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Max Reif 11 November 2005

Your title really drew me. That's quite a metaphor, and it works! (AND, hopefully, if we're a suitcase, we can use our adulthood to UNPACK!) : -)

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

Ouch! Painfully dejected! A wonderful read!

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