Human Species Comments

i had a little trouble at first, trying to figure out if where the commas all were made sense to me. when i finished reading i decided that the commas were ok where they were, but i wanted to know to whom the poet was writing. do you know? and do you know if it WAS a suicide note? ; one reader thought it was. if your friend doesn't mind you submitting the poem, then i say good for you to share it with poemhunter. thanks for sharing the poem and for the poem note.

Poweful write and great message....thanks for sharing,

fast and interesting..i like it

so you taught our touch pollutes, lot of pathos in the line....a very moving poem!

a nice tribute to your friend. very touching

Highly charged with emotion. Very touchy.

a nice tribute. but i hate racism

A very touching tribute to your friend. Society should learn from their suicide.

A very touching tribute to your friend. Society should learn from their suicide.

By commiting suicide after leaving the poem as suicide note ur friend has given a hard slap on the so called modern and liberal society.

Simply written with a great message. I like it.

bit touched.... good poem.. country's talents are getting destroyed due to these kind of malpractices..

racism, a bad act a nice tribute to him may he rest in peace