Sunday, April 5, 2009

Human Song From Dawn To Dusk Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sun hasn't come out yet and still in his night gown.
But he awakes, even in the sleep
He hears the planes fly
And see bombs dropp from the sky.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Alison Cassidy 05 April 2009

Your first line is superb - I can see your sun in his night gown - and the Tagore quotation makes a special sort of sense. The reader hears the tears in your voice, Nimal and is moved by the profundity of your words. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 05 April 2009

How effectively you give yourself away in words! This is the mark of the true poet. I like this one very much. Take care. Warmest regards, Sandra

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