Human Right Comments

Insightfully crafted with conviction

The last line fight for our right, reminds me of one of Bob Marley's songs. We have the same thirst for fairness and justice

Well done, Dan Walker. Sure it is a human right to fight for what is right; though justice is such an elusive thing to grasp in this present world, hence, the pain that may last so long. But just a little while longer and all our pains will be flushed and past. It would be just as God promised it would. I love the simplicity of your verse.

Just remember, who fights with the sword, shall be fought down with the sword. When mankind turns to God for help and believes in His help, then will come the change, not until man wants to chop the other down. Real peace comes to those who turns to the spirit. (not to the church, but to the real Spirit)

a heart-felt write, my friend i hope one day.we will all rejoice and burry the corruption and injustice.thanks for sharing this awesome piece.

Simply amazing, , , loved the rhymes ;)

I really loved this one! ! I actually feelt to fight for the moment ;)

Hi, Dave What a nice poem on human right...my rating on this poem 9/10 and further improve if we can include God's intervention to help us to let us all know what is the real human right. The answer lie in the Bible if everyone understand God's message well. My personal Reflection on human right; Human right is basic need in modern society and We need God's intervention to give human being the wisdom and knowledge to do what is right and wrong. The basic rules for human right is 10 commandments given us but we fail to follow them faithfully. In the end, we committed so many sins and criminals....This poem reflects human being tried and struggle to gain human right among human being...which I think it's quite impossible unless we believe God comes and help us at the end of time as mentioned in the last chapter of the New Testament: The Revelation. regard, Lawrence

i like this poem comes from the heart

Thank you very much for inviting me to read this poem of yours, it's very truthful and intelligently writen. Keep up the good work.

this is awesome. Enough people are fighting for human rights, but rarely they are heard.

Great message. Poem finely set. Surely Human Rights is a cause worth fighting for. 10++

Spot on, well done Dave.

We must fight for our rights, to be kind and generous is a good thing but to forfeit our rights is foolish. Nice write.

100% mark. brave frnd. u r right. let us unite and fight for our right

Well, Dave...like Sir Eric said, the time is now..superb poem my friend...

Bravo Dave. It made me sit up straight.

A good poem throwing a great challenge to mankind for survival. I particularly like the second stanza. The rhyme and lyrics -fantastic! Yes, Alan I can see the link with my Those We Voted.

the quest for the peace never ends in a greedy world....may your words give power to those who are denied of justice...........great words. lets all unite and fight for our right..........

Thanks for telling the plain truth! We the people...must unite.Make this world a safer, friendlier place to live in.Thanks.