Human Life Marked By Desire Comments

But let our desires be with righteousness. Nice piece of work.

The poem is based on the poet's observations about different stages of life. Desires motivate everyone to make efforts in life. Thanks. You will not find none without desire, And if so, will not be a man.

It is Maya or desire that we should admire no dream shall be fuilled if we are not strong willed

A wonderful poem....our longings and wants, our desires, may change. But we mortals do not change.....desire is our constant companion. A brilliant piece.

Lovely poem. Desires are mirage tire but have no end.

Indeed, Young, middle age, and old, we all have a desire for something! Thanks for sharing, Abdulrazak!

Exactly. A poet always desires reader world wide and a publisher desires a poet who demands no money, such and such......

Your statement depicted in the poem Human Life Marked By Desire is true and universial. Actually we have desires and these differ according to age. So nicely envisioned. ...10

I like this poem however I don't totally agree that old people desire death. Some are quite vibrant and want to live on. I know my goal is to live to 104 plus so I suppose that's my desire. This poem certainly brings the reader to a place to ponder on what they desire, is it good or is it sinful...

There are all types and reasons for desire, we know not how they come into our beings, but they are always hiding there, springing themselves into our minds and hearts, surprising us many times. Great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

It is not easy to be free of desire. When I think of it, to be free of desire is a desire in itself.

Different stages of life are marked by prominent desires.At no stage we are without desire.Buddha said -This desire is the root cause of all sorrows.And we should strive for a desire -less stage.

Desiring not to have desires is tricky! ! ! Just sitting still in Beingness is Freedom

Desire keeps the life going and yet it is important for us not to possess undesirable desires. Loved the poem and the way you have cataloged desires in different stages of man's life.

Desire keeps the human mind-body machine running - a desire-less machine comes to a halt in about three weeks as noted by some wise men. Even in the category of desires there are numerous subtle differences as no two desires are identical, that makes us individuals. Thank you for sharing this enlightening poem, Abdulrazak Aralematti. - - 10

Fantastic write. Of course we will not find none without desire. Appropriate depiction. TFS. ....10

A thoughtful poem, yes old age brings such pains and problems that one starts desiring a peaceful death......10

You are so right, Abdulrazak. We all have desires and they differ with age. It is how you react to those desires that is important