Friday, October 23, 2015

Human Kindness Comments

Rating: 5.0

Thick December fog wrapping around,
she had left the office after night shift.
Suddenly she found her bank card missing
and no money to hire a taxi or board a bus.
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Ajit Das
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Sonali Ganguly 30 March 2016

a touching story.... such sense of humanity is missing those days.... beautiful attempt to increase the awareness

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Darwin Henry Beuning 09 February 2016

Ajit, Sometimes, those who have nothing have the most. Those who are a notch above, are the ones to fear

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 October 2015

Coming to know her plight in shivering cold, ..Very wonderful drafting shared with deep expression.

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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Absolutely beautiful poem Ajit! Reflecting human kindness within it's depths. A truly remarkable occurrence you have written about, I pray that others are inspired by it's self-sacrificing message of human kindness. It needs to be mirrored by others in this world. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 October 2015

'Their reciprocal reaction scripted a message of human kindness- still a binding force. Beautiful poem with rare occurrences of this kind deducing that exception proves the law. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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