Sunday, October 23, 2016

Human Hearts Comments

Rating: 4.5

I am a hill too small and you are a high mountain,
Still I stand in front of you making a green valley,
On the right a green carpet on the left a fountain,
At your bosom I see the beginning of an alley,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2016

I am a hill and you are mountain. I am heart you are beat and beauty is in every chapter of love. Fountain of love is interesting flowing here in this nicely penned poem.10

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Khalida Bano Ali 25 October 2016

What a lovely and touching poem! ...................................

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Kelly Kurt 23 October 2016

As always, an insightful and poignantly penned piece of poetry!

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