island unto itself this human body
survival its purpose waves greedy conspiring
bruised and battered bloodied in triumph
human surrenders in gamely revival
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good write Mark...metaphorical with nice imageries...thanks...10
a thoughtful poem! fine diction! astonishing flow! and the poem emitting wisdom! 10+
Fantastic flow with this superb write Mark...I love the imagery..each line masterfully crafted..delivering this piece with golden ink....brilliant work 10+++
'Open up solitude receive the light that soul secluded selfless may soar ' Rachel Ann Butler