Human Endeavor Comments

Here is a beautiful song sung in honor of the unsung heroes, Who were not given space in history… These flower bloomed in the desert and died unnoticed Taking the baton of human endeavor to survive… Well composed, exhibiting the special emotion.. The rhetoric does sing of the known ones too…. Abha

The message is clear and full or thoughts and ideals, here. I like the way you come from the contemplation of nature to the inner thoughts, from a peaceful description to more tormented questions... your battle against incongruity is still hopeful for it takes the praise of human capabilities to make things more beautiful. A kind of try to make people awake.

I like it, bravo bravo!