Monday, February 15, 2016

Human Body..A Perfect Structure.. Comments

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Human body
A perfect structure
Created by god
Send by god
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abhilasha bhatt
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Raj Vikram 15 March 2016

Thought provoking lines and very good structure Abhilasha....

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 February 2016

Conscience! Let us respect this body. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 February 2016

First of all many thanks for calling me Dadajan, number of my daughters and granddaughters is increasing rapidly. Now coming to this poem, it's a lovely thought nicely presented. I agree with you humans are the best self thinking computers of the known universe. I am still thinking if it's still in the controls of its maker or has gone out of control.

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Nosheen Irfan 15 February 2016

What a beautifully conceived poem! A body came with whiff of love and hate...which gets reduces into ashes when heart stops working. A true picture of humans presented with an economy of words. Well done Abhilasha.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 16 February 2016

Thank you nosheen :)

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Mithilesh Yadav 15 February 2016

Nice thought..........., . Well designed...... Thanks for sharing

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Abhilasha Bhatt 16 February 2016

Than you :)

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Souren Mondal 15 February 2016

A sweet and well crafted poem Abhilasha... Human body is a miracle of nature perfected by evolution through centuries indeed.. Thanks for sharing - :)

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Abhilasha Bhatt 16 February 2016

Thank you souren sir :)

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M Asim Nehal 15 February 2016

Descriptive and informative. Nicely thought and written, Abhi....Loved it.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 15 February 2016

Thank you asim sir :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2016

So, let us cover this human body from the eyes of the public! However, it is very sad that, many are naked in the eyes of the public already. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abhilasha Bhatt 15 February 2016

Thank you Edward sir :)

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