Human body
A perfect structure
Created by god
Send by god
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Conscience! Let us respect this body. Thanks for sharing.
First of all many thanks for calling me Dadajan, number of my daughters and granddaughters is increasing rapidly. Now coming to this poem, it's a lovely thought nicely presented. I agree with you humans are the best self thinking computers of the known universe. I am still thinking if it's still in the controls of its maker or has gone out of control.
What a beautifully conceived poem! A body came with whiff of love and hate...which gets reduces into ashes when heart stops working. A true picture of humans presented with an economy of words. Well done Abhilasha.
Nice thought..........., . Well designed...... Thanks for sharing
A sweet and well crafted poem Abhilasha... Human body is a miracle of nature perfected by evolution through centuries indeed.. Thanks for sharing - :)
Descriptive and informative. Nicely thought and written, Abhi....Loved it.
So, let us cover this human body from the eyes of the public! However, it is very sad that, many are naked in the eyes of the public already. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thought provoking lines and very good structure Abhilasha....