Friday, March 23, 2018

Human Comments

Rating: 5.0

When shall we learn to know
People around us?
Not by their name
But as ‘human' same.
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Devanshu Patel
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Valsa George 20 July 2019

Men are essentially the same with almost similar cravings, interests and traits! We may be known by different names, we may have different religious practices, we may be citizens of different countries and climes. But these differences should not pose as barriers in loving or accepting others as we are all human and are born as children of God! A great message of universal brotherhood! A 10

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Gajanan Mishra 22 February 2019

Beautiful write, the only truth panchamahabhuta.

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Pallab Chaudhury 05 January 2019

A very nice poem, in deed... giving value to humanity... It's a nice experience too, to go through your poems, dear poet. With best wishes, PC

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 December 2018

Differ may the name Like earring, ring or chain But we must remember, ‘the gold' is same. What beautiful words! You have brought out Upanishadic truth in these three lines. that the soul is the same in all life. The beauty of this poem lies in its simplicity also apart from its profound truth.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2018

It brilliantly expresses in detail through questions on how we should maintain relations and treat our fellow human beings. The magnificent thoughts embedded in this piece of art boil.down to the core of our existence. If we will put into.action these beautiful thoughts, the world will be a better place. Beautifully and cleverly written.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 December 2018

A powerful, insightful, inspiring and wonderful write. The title that has a universal appeal drew me to go through with this write. The rest of the work has been woven beautifully with series of queries that ignite one's mind to ponder about.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 August 2018

The concept of Panchmahabhuta is brilliantly depicted in this beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing....10

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Ana Sanchez 25 July 2018

love this, when can we just get along without judgement.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 July 2018

Yes, the five constitute this whole universe, a thoughtful poem.

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Britte Ninad 05 June 2018

greatly written on the theme of humanitarian thanks for sharing with the concept of PANCHMAHABHUTA great 10++++

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 30 May 2018

I especially grant with gratitude this verse. Not with their race But embrace all with grace ....... Because, . .....We must remember, the gold is same

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 30 May 2018

Great poem indeed! These questions questions the urgent for mind revolution and leaves the reader with a lot to reflect on....10++++ There it goes to my favourite poems

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Robert Murray Smith 27 May 2018

I like this poem. Well penned.+++10

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Poem Lover 23 May 2018

Great! We ought to love all and see all in the same way as we see our selves!

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Bharati Nayak 22 May 2018

When shall we learn to see People around us? Not by their colors But as ‘human brothers'. When shall we learn to deal People around us? Not with their race But embrace all with grace.- - - - - - - - - - - - - -An excellent poem on 'Humanity'.

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Sublime sentiments that can change the world into a better place. Well done my friend!

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Deep Paul 12 April 2018

Differ may the name Like earring, ring or chain But we must remember, ‘the gold' is same.....excellent work..10++++=

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Devanshu Patel 12 April 2018

Thanks for your comment...Dear friend?

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Bipasha D 02 April 2018

A pragmatic write. So very true. We all are made of the 5 elements you mentioned in the note. Yet, we often forget that.

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Devanshu Patel 28 March 2018

Namaskar Bharti ji! 🙏🙏🙏 Many many thanks from the bottom of my heart! For your valuable comments and the deep religious insight you have shown by quoting one of the Shanti Mantras from our Great Vedas...these are not mere words...I really mean it..THANKS.

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Saniya Galeyeva 27 March 2018

The poem I really need these days. Education, abikities, race, caste are not the differences which should devide us into inferior and superiour as all people are equal.

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Devanshu Patel 28 March 2018

Hearty thanks dear Saniya for not only visiting my page but also for the time you have spend to think over it and showing your true concern for mankind by giving your valuable comment for it. Stay blessed and also connected with your precious comments in future...

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