Sunday, November 2, 2014

Hum Tum Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tum mazi bhee ho hal bhi ho museaqbil per bhi chaye ho,
Mujhe iski koi fikr nahin tum apne ho ya paraye ho,
Tum dost bhi ho tum dushman bhi nazdeek magar tum aate nahin,
Main chahoon to tumko choo loon magar tum mujhse aankh milate nahin,
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Salini Nair 04 November 2014

Main chahoon to tumko choo loon magar tum mujhse aankh milate nahin, Main tumko bulata rahta hoon tum pas mere keyun aate nahin.......................beautiful.... enjoyed

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 November 2014

I liked it more than th English version.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 November 2014

Beautiful poem. I liked both the versions. Both are equally good. I loved reading it.

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