Hum To God Comments
Stomp ahead, stomp ahead, stomp,
Hump ahead, hump ahead, hump.
Jump behind, jump behind, jump,
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Good writing, Good rhythm maintained well and rhymed.keep it up sir.
From childhood to manhood we all understand the hum to God but to plant this seed in the young that's the start on thee right path of life...the beat is wonderful...regards
Very nice poem with rhythm and rhyme and very unique in composition.having insights.........amazing write
Like the rhythm of the poem very creative and playful. Had rhymes at the beginning and end cool
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7/23/2025 2:28:48 PM # 1.0.0
Drum the drum and leave the rum! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.