Wednesday, September 10, 2008

! ! ! Hum Drum Comments

Rating: 2.8

There is whistling
There is drumming
Who is humming in between?
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Raveendran N.V.
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Alison Cassidy 15 January 2010

Between the in breath and the out breath is the place between - where all is bliss. Perhaps this is the same place that hums between the whistling and the drumming. This is a most attractive poem where the words become the music, the drumming becomes the swaying and the trees speak. Your title is perfect and your final stanza sizzles. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 11 September 2008

The sound and the music of another world, another culture lingers in my mind.. I like this very much. Glad to read you again, my poet friend. Fond regards, Sandra

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