Tuesday, February 13, 2018

Hum! De-Dum Hum! Comments

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I saw them in town,
they were two sitting down.
The big lady was beating drums,
Hum! de-dum! Hum!
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David Kinyanjui
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Dr Antony Theodore 31 July 2020

They serenaded like lyric, she did it with psych. Alas! her audience though, acted deaf and dumb, She could not help but watch them pass through. Very symbolic. the lady and the drums. wonderful poem. tony

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David. 14 February 2018

Tony, thankyou too.It can never be more real.

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David 14 February 2018

Tony,thanks to you too.It can never be, than that real...

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 February 2018

She equaled paled ink, she looked weak, she was sick.... realities of life soooooo painful....... depicted so well dear poet. thank u. tony

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David Kinyanjui

David Kinyanjui

Nairob., Kenya.
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