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An original take on poem. Very creative.10+

oh my gosh, i love this poem, great imagery

Too great to even comment on. I laughed, I cried and then kicked myself for not being able to write anything like this. Well, at least I read it and loved it, crumbs but participating in the whole loaf anyway.

I enjoy the image of the poems in a difficult age - teenagers so annoying doing nothing... just love it! ! and thank you Sir...

Ha ha.... this is superb! I love your imagination.... it's the best! ! ! HG: -) xx

Ha ha, this is a perfect response to the subject: publishing a book. It's a wonderful, playful and a bit sad, even not a bit, bitter sad, although very entertaining sweet piece of poetry. Thank you for your unique response to my question. (I still do hope your poems will find their book and will settle down there and live happily together) I long for them to leave home go find a book of their own live in a little poetry magazine or the tip of somebody’s tongue.