Hugs Comments

An amazing poem. Enjoyed it

deodorant for frequent hugs!

This is definitely a senryu: it has that sharp, incisive line at the end! But I take it as a haiku: for I very much love hugs, more than kisses! Loved it!

Using deodorant is a fashion of modern civilization. This poem reflects clearly.

He should use a deodorant. Really i smiled when i finished reading this. lovely poem. tony

He hugs everyone His hold is so tight He should use a deodorant........interesting inscription that brings me here for second time.

I know the type. Smells awful.+++10

Where there is need of deodorant, think how fair his hug is! An interesting and humourous write. Thanks for sharing.

There are so many persons, bad smell comes from them, but they themselves do not feel it. They should not hug others or at least they should use a deodorant. A nice poem.

Funny! ! With the muse of your humour. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is a funny poem. Liked it.

An amazing Haiku Rose, enjoyed reading it................10

Smelly hug! A poem full of scent!

The deodorant would make the hug much nicer.

Nothing wrong with his hugs but his body odor? Oh, No.

Rose Marie, this poem is both warm and sweet...... if he will use deodorant... 10+++

Pleasing odor makes the day pleasant.. Good one