Tuesday, May 22, 2012

Hug Me, Please... Comments

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Please hug me, I like to feel your warmth,
addressing me with words of love and affection,
giving me the best of the world,
as far as you are concerned,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Heather Wilson 25 May 2012

Such a wonderful write, so sad, a small child begging for love, such a simple thing that costs nothing at all.

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Rajendran Muthiah 24 May 2012

What an emotional expression of the longing baby to hug her parents. Wonderful.

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Gajanan Mishra 23 May 2012

Very good poem, congratulation. I like it most. Yours Gajanan Mishra

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