Sunday, September 9, 2012

Hubby's Train Comments

Rating: 4.8

Hubby snores, a midnight train,
Left arm is giving me pain,
Eyes wide open, energy drain,
Can't fall asleep, I speak plain.
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Philo Yan
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Philo Yan 09 September 2012

Thanks Deepak Manchanda. Cravings came, hard to resist. We live to eat, what a twist. Love of food so persist, No use, could not resist. Romeo Della Valle for your generous and encouraging comments!

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Deepak Manchanda 09 September 2012

This was a good job of the brain. In future keep hubby's food quite plain.

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Romeo Della Valle 09 September 2012

Admirable! A well crafted write embedded with meaningful and touching words along with a very rich imagery! Short but powerful! 10+++ Your heart clearly spoke through this beautiful write! Thank you for sharing and keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City!

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