Saturday, June 28, 2008

However This Is Perceived Comments

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I am in no mood,
To prove I'm familiar with those same tired games.
I've graduated to another playground.
Consider it an upgrade.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Mike Hester 28 June 2008

Hello Lawrence, Well done! It can all become a playground, can't it? (Especially the bullies - I hate the bullies.) This poem has the required snap-crackle-pop, and speaks universally for those who have chosen to move-on. Clever use of the word 'digested.' Should we be a bit amused? Cheers, Mike

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