Saturday, March 18, 2023

How You Must Have Suffered To Pluck A Cloud Comments

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How you must have suffered to pluck a cloud,
to tear its tendrils to rain in my heart,
to sweep the sadness of a coffin shroud
casting long shadows to keep us apart.
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Linda Marie Van Tassell
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Pallavi Tripathi 19 March 2023

suffered to get you a cloud! Question for him/her: Were you worth it?

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Marvellous! To pluck a cloud … tear …… to sweep the sadness of a coffin shroud"… loved it.

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Nosheen Irfan 19 March 2023

Fabulous! Beautifully poignant. Displays great poetic finesse and class. Bravo!

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Mary Angela Douglas 18 March 2023

Exquisite, beautiful, truly fine poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 March 2023

This is really a wonderful poem. Beautifully crafted. Great share. Thanks.

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

Linda Marie Van Tassell

Lynchburg, Virginia
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