How you must have suffered to pluck a cloud,
to tear its tendrils to rain in my heart,
to sweep the sadness of a coffin shroud
casting long shadows to keep us apart.
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Marvellous! To pluck a cloud … tear …… to sweep the sadness of a coffin shroud"… loved it.
Fabulous! Beautifully poignant. Displays great poetic finesse and class. Bravo!
This is really a wonderful poem. Beautifully crafted. Great share. Thanks.
suffered to get you a cloud! Question for him/her: Were you worth it?