If I might I'd like to suggest revising this write.
The stars do not glow.
Our end.
and maybe leave out the part where the shadows drag you away.
Instead: The shadows will come, and into a dark world they'll take you away.
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If I might I'd like to suggest revising this write. The stars do not glow. Our end. and maybe leave out the part where the shadows drag you away. Instead: The shadows will come, and into a dark world they'll take you away.