How to write a new poem?
I couldn't find new things
Whereever I see I find
The same things in my mind.
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This is a problem faced by most of us! We find the subjects for writing poems exhausted! But in peace, when we sit meditating, we get the ability to write on many topics. Though the subjects may be old or frequently dealt with, still they will assume novelty and beauty when properly inspired! Great write!
Very inspiring indeed and the fact spelt out very honestly with regards to problems almost a composer faces while thinking and composing new poems when old and conventional topics get exhausted......outstanding....thanks for sharing......10
A pleasure to read and think @ your poem garden, headmaster... always inspiring and fruitful... Trees, sky, and water, soil Animals, humans, reptiles all I see same huts and edifices Life with frolic and tragic.
Kumarmani, you capture the struggle of each writer, poet, so well. And indeed...when the peace comes, those new words and ideas follow. A wonderful poem, Kumarmani.
A precious piece of work! ...A person with righteous works Get knight, prestige, and fame...Thanks dear sir for sharing!
The title of this poem catches my eye. I go through with it and it was weaved with passion and spirituality. For me, the heart beat of this beautiful piece lies in the last stanza. A marvelous write that goes on the core values of an individual and his deep faith in God Almighty.10
Topic for a poem is in the surroundings and one's own thoughts. Put in words turns into a poem. Nicely explained.
' Karma' is a key word with you, and in your culture. The West knows little of karma, except that it is like a settling of accounts, in this life or the next, a reward for the good things which you do. Good karma can make a person ready to write poems, quite easily: it is his reward. Like you, I see basically the same scenes every day-animals, people, buildings. It is how we see the world that matters, I think.
How true your lovely words Kumarmani. Person enjoys fruits as per karma Resolves go with soul to next birth Karma remains with soul as shadow Till enjoying the fruits of action. As in heaven will be on Earth for those that experience and understand these concepts of life.10
I feel, there are shocks (mental, physical, spiritual) , trigger a poem inside me. Yes, you are right... everything is same... what should not be same is Awareness, individually and socially. for a righteous person, yes poems are fruits. beautiful
Yes, life is the sum effect of a course. One has to pick fruits of one's own actions. A well penned Poem with a profound message. Thanks for sharing..
Yes Kumar, everything seems to repeat like day and night and birth and death....we see the same repeatedly...what we should try is to see the one sole supreme Power in all....once we reach that mental state everything then turns blissful....I always adore your spiritual thoughts and poems...this one is also well done...thank you
Yes you might see the same thing daily but that is something nice to see in you, through you that each time you write you still can pull off many good things...and here also i learned of how those process going in your mind, to write a poem that steadily kind and peaceful as you always do :) sweet thought!
''Walking on right path leads him heaven Peace arrives and poems he can pen. '' - these are great lines to complete your poem, and a great Ars Poetica.
Karma remains with soul as shadow Till enjoying the fruits of action. so true dear Kumaramani.... b ut remember tha you are one among those great poets about whom u wrote in the last lines of this poemmm.. you are great........ really....... please believe it....
How to write a new poem? I couldn't find new things Whereever I see I find The same things in my mind. wonderful starting to the main poent, thanks for sharing,10