Wednesday, September 10, 2014

How To Succeed Comments

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Though you may into some struggles
That is multiplying your troubles
And making your life quite uneasy
Say more like a crumbling bundle
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Clarence Prince
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Bri Edwards 08 January 2017

Though you may into some struggles...........i think a word is missing in this line. By staying much closer to the Lord The road to mess-up is very broad..........you mean this? to me, this means being closer to God makes it easier to mess up one's life. well, i like the emphasis on resisting a moment or a life of crime. but i would be super tempted to steal if i didn't even have a dime! bri :)

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Conley Murray 26 March 2016

That is a great poem, I am so thankful for sharing this poem with me. I feel so blessed for what God has done for me. I will share this poem with my friends. Again thank you for sharing it with me. Also I want to thank you for the good comment on my poem.

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 20 November 2014

Dear Clarence Prince, this is really very inspirational. Thanks for sharing this from the depths of your heart. We need this for our time. A gentle guide and way to live a successful life. Thanks for sharing.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 06 November 2014

His words you have to speak because he is our father, Lord. Then only we can touch the top of success. Beautiful poem shared on. Nice realization. Excellent work great poet.

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 25 October 2014

Surrendering to the god the real solution from problems a nice idea.Beautiful poem.

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