Sunday, March 2, 2008

How To Make A Man Out Of Fire Comments

Rating: 4.8

I wrote this in response to a beautiful poem by Charles Bennett called 'How to Make a Woman out of Water'

Take a walk in a forest.
Find a stick. Choose carefully.
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Janice Windle
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Adeline Foster 24 July 2009

Great show, good poem. Adeline

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Roger Cornish 06 March 2008

And on second reading even better.... '.....instruction manuals, magazines and The wooden swords of bygone childhood. For these are fuels that fire a man Before he steps like Phoenix From the pyre.....' Deeply awesome... Rx

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Roger Cornish 05 March 2008

Oh Jan..... this is your BEST! As James say's 'Extraordinary on a stick! ' RogerXxxx

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Don Mcwilliams 02 March 2008

Wow, Janice, this was primal, magical...like some alchemist's prescription left over from a dark time. Well, darker than now, I mean. Best, Don

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James B. Earley 02 March 2008

An extraordinary work! Thanks for sharing.

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C.R. Clark 02 March 2008

Wow Janice. A wonderful description of building a fire without man-made fire starters. It also illustrates what we can do if we have the determination, even in the absence of special tools. Your wording is great. An excellent write. Thanks Richard

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LOVEFOOL Aka 02 March 2008

Wow a very tender poem I enjoyed reading thank you

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