Saturday, September 8, 2018

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Even the greatest revolutionaries couldn't change the whole world.
They changed a section of a society for a short duration,
gave a road map to the world,
and left the world to be worshipped,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 September 2018

What a wonderful and powerful political write. Very insightful. A deep analysis of the political system of the world. I agree with the Poet, revolutionaries could not change the world. There will always be another one..A cycle..never ending. Liked the closure lines. Very clever. 10+++ and on to my Poem List.

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 September 2018

Because they teach to know the almighty unseen! But forget the conscience and the seen human veins in world

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

Let me be confined to my sweet home, to change my home I should change myself, but how to do it? For one that is needed to be changed I have more than one lame excuses........so impressive and true. A poem with nice theme has been beautifully inscribed.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 September 2018

When one knows he can do FA then the only thing one ought to attempt is to change one's own self AND that is worse Why should I say you So change the world only for a few moments if you could AS then you too will move on Your not the sun nor the moon nor that arrow which traverses the world non stop The world will move on but you would have been forgotten like I am POET ME WHO? SO let the UNKNOWN GOD FOREVER RULE WHICH HE IS STILL SINCE AGES passed and ages hence till he says...

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Kostas Lagos 09 September 2018

An interesting poem that is worthy reading again and again

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Kelly Kurt 08 September 2018

Indeed, I only have rationalizations that are my excuses.

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Khalida Bano Ali 08 September 2018

A philosophic poem, nobody could bring a lasting revolution.

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