Friday, May 1, 2009

*how To Critique A Poem Comments

Rating: 3.2

If you read somebody’s poem and it makes you want to say,
“I think this piece is wonderful; it really made my day, ”
just go ahead and say it – feedback like this is good,
but saying WHY you like it will please them (well, it should) .
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Paul Hansford
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Nicely put, dear poet

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Sondy Sloan 29 August 2019

What beautiful advice Sir the rhyming was very natural and not at all forced. Polite critique

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 09 November 2014

Still might feel inclined. Nicely written poem on critique. Deep essence it pours over thoughts. Excellent work really shared on. Motivational poem.

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Paul Hansford 05 September 2009

I think Ronald is saying pretty much what I am saying here, except that he does go into some technicalities at the end. It may be interesting for some of us to know all about meter, and rhetorical figures like anaphora (even I had to look up the word, though I am quite happy using the technique) . As for meter, I know the difference in theory between an anapest and a dactyl, but wonder if there is any difference in practice? I fear too many people would be put off by technical language like this, and would be better to write something that has a rhythm (any rhythm) that they can hear.

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Deborah Cromer 20 August 2009

Precisely! Information given with accuracy and professional worth. What ever the reason may be for reading or reviewing another's work of written art, most definitely should always be done with respect. Positive and encouraging feedback can only help to support one's writing abilities. DC

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Louis Rams 07 August 2009

i like what you have written, because you're to the point, and you also let others know that you should have others read your poems as well as you're reading theirs.and also how to use criticism and constructive criticism. this is a very informative and enlightning poem. GR888T A TEN

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Indira Renganathan 01 August 2009

Your words are excellent and eloquent guide through the avenue of poetry...I need to read it for many more times....thanks a lot

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Sandra Martyres 31 July 2009

A very good etiquette lesson on how to comment on a poem or write a critique on one... I do wish it could be made into a compulsory read for all those over-eager critics.....Great write..thanks for sharing your poetic opinion.

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Black Mendilouche 21 June 2009

I concur with your other commentators, this poem should be cited as a classic example of the etiquette of sharing poetry. Thankyou for sharing this!

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Phil Smith 20 June 2009

verry good poem, it makes you think. it gets strit to the point and the poetry is amazing. i'll start reading your poems now and i'm sure they're as good as this one, i had pleasure in reading this piece and it really did 'make my day'. Phil

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Ana Zaldivar 31 May 2009

Nice.. i think just the same... but there's sometimes people that even if you read their work, they don't even say thanks.. and sometimes there's polite people who even sends a message to say thanks.. well it depends on the person.. I'm now going to start reading your poetry :)

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Shirin Sheikhi 26 May 2009

paul reding your poems is not the matter of making comment but enjoynig them , made me smile what you recommended after sending you the message well done wish you the best

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Jennie Radley 25 May 2009

Paul - another poem of yours that I really liked - having been a teacher, I know how important it is to encourage enthusiastically while criticising gently! 'How to Critique a Poem' should be compulsory reading for all teachers, and it doesn't only apply to poems!

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C. P. Sharma 14 May 2009

I think this piece is wonderful; it enlightened me a lot. I shall feel highly obliged if you spare a few moments out of your busy schedule to read and comment on 'I am civilized'. CP

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2009

Deaar Paul I would say I think this piece is wonderful; it really made my day, ”

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Indira Babbellapati 06 May 2009

hmmm...straight from the horse's mouth!

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thank you for your sugestion..that was cute one.but did you follow that today..i need to read your other poems to see what can i say

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Susan Jarvis 01 May 2009

What better way to guide a would-be poet in the art of critique than a poem - an entertaining, educational and perfectly composed one, at that. Super stuff from a true master of the craft. S :)

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Sally Carter 01 May 2009

I really like this one. I love poems that are straight to the point, as this is. This is the first new poem I have read on this site, and the first message I have posted! I will look for more by you.

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Sue Sie 01 May 2009

A Superb written detailed verse Paul...I do like how you have expressed yourself..and got the point across..impeccably...well done you.. ;)

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