The day the lightning struck my brain,
I could still remember the flashes in the mind,
The ground opened up for me to faint,
The thirst constricted the throat to find,
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well-crafted deep diving into painful disintegration. a creative reintegration through art. an heroic victory. congratulations!
Really good poem.I read and feel it. Thanks. I invite you to read my poem and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra
Wonderful. The thought of getting out of it without pills is great. I think a very large percentage of depressed people do not need the pills but truly empathetic people around them and a lot of will. This being said, not all can heal without the help of pills or doctors, especially the seasonal one as mentioned by Mark. I just started to read the book, the new black, which is about depression and here I found this wonderful poem. Execellent
Great poem.We all srong defence mechanism to maintain our internal equilibrum. This is explained in this poem. Are you a parapschologist? This is great. You took me back to my area of discipline. Thank you for sharing
A great write on a very difficult subject; I have a similar problem with seasonal depression, but it knocks me for six. And, have to take medication if just for a month or two. But then on medication I find I can’t write and my muse is dead and gone…
This is so amazing Veeraiyah. You have such hidden strength to over come this. And to share this that is a blessing. Thank You and keep up this wonderful writing this can help so many.