Wearing your beautiful veils of vapor and haze,
Restless, agitate, hyperactive wandering lass,
Hope of reaching the groom, the sun, stagger,
The villain gravity keeps you close to the earth,
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Yes strive harder and smarter. That is what it takes to prosper. Insightful poem. Good use of metaphors.
Yes, Veera, too many of us want to prosper without effort. Laziness does not pay off Once we manage to enjoy our work, prosperity is near
I would never had put it any better, efforts need perfomance and perfomance leads to expectations being met, i adore the 7th line, Mother nature shall never punish us indeed, great write The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)