Sunday, July 1, 2012

How To Be Prosperous Comments

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Wearing your beautiful veils of vapor and haze,
Restless, agitate, hyperactive wandering lass,
Hope of reaching the groom, the sun, stagger,
The villain gravity keeps you close to the earth,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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I would never had put it any better, efforts need perfomance and perfomance leads to expectations being met, i adore the 7th line, Mother nature shall never punish us indeed, great write The_African_Son (Th³_ªfR¹cª¬_šºN)

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Captain Cur 03 July 2012

Yes strive harder and smarter. That is what it takes to prosper. Insightful poem. Good use of metaphors.

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Hans Vr 03 July 2012

Yes, Veera, too many of us want to prosper without effort. Laziness does not pay off Once we manage to enjoy our work, prosperity is near

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