How Time Flies Comments

time is the dictator of all....fantastic write....

A fantastic poem. Loved the imagery of words you used to portray... Very true said, time flies away so fast, some moments we feel to relish it once again but time cannot be reversed. I loved the lines..... Oh! Magician I beseech To transform brown Unto green for a moment.... Loved reading it.

This is an amazingly beautiful poem..... Time flies and seasons rush from verdant spring to ripening autumn and dead winter! The fruit pricked down by the bird showing its green rind, its yellow pulp and its brown hard nut inside is a well chosen metaphor! However we wish, retracing our steps back to where we started is impossible! For this you deserve full marks Deepak!

That speedy flight of time adds to the charms of life. Our life is a beautiful entity and we have our pace here to the fill.The pathos and the inability to have a reversal are certainly a setback in our life.. A fine write Pattnaikji.

alas there's no reversal for time's flow nor any halt. wonderful poem.