How Time Flies Comments

i had to look up the word ephemera, AND read the poem again. i found agbada online but i doubt i found the definition of buba that you meant! ! ! (i looked up buba and bubba) i'm not familiar with some of the expressions you used, like a hilly bully that fake him taller [do you mean to write fake or make i wonder], and has his tongue, but i get the picture you are painting of a father who has returned to traditional african clothing and refuses to compromise with his son on his wardrobe choices. thanks for sharing.

This is a good effort. Very apt in transforming experience into literary work.